1. When I started my Down Draft, it was about...
When I first began brainstorming ideas for my downdraft I immediately thought about height since I think it plays a big part in media and society. I soon started writing ideas about why being short had difficulties but then I realized that it sounded more like a rant then a story. 2. I've expanded it by also writing about... In the end I decided to keep the same topic but move it in a different direction. I wrote about our culture and the medias view of beauty which tied into height. I also wrote a bit about my personal experience and a survey I read on National Geographic where participants go on a virtual train ride measuring 5 - 10 inches shorter than their original height. They reflected on feeling more vulnerable, more negative and had a greater sense of paranoia. 3. The most helpful feedback I've had was... The most helpful feedback I've received was Dr. P's. I think a lot of time most students don't put enough time and effort into giving you ideas and feedback that you can really take and build into your story. The reason I chose Dr. P's was because he was both specific and clear and he gave many thoughts on which I could implement into my own piece. 4. In order to make my piece awesome, I'd really like help with... I would like help in just where to take my piece in general. I think my story had a good flow but I don't know what specifically I'm trying to tell the reader. I also need help in incorporating my own personal experience into the story and being more specific.
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